Had my first e-critique last night from Victor where he reviewed my sketches and final 3D pose. He really liked the sketches and said that overall the 3D pose was very dynamic and had an overall good Line of Action [LOA]. He did give me some notes, mainly:
1. Overall nice Line of Action [LOA]. But, line does tend to get broken and bumpy, especially where the thigh and knee are concerned. Simplify this LOA.
2. Pull back on the torso bend 10-20% as it looks like it hurts at the moment.
3. Reduce bump where shoulder meets the head.
4. Right now this leg looks like a short, straight leg. Put more bend in the knee! Will strengthen the silhouette.
5. Make this arm straighter for variety and to contrast the other arm. Arms look a little too long, though hard to have the model catch something above his head due to the large head.
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